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Rachael

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2021.07.16 09:57

Forever yours by Rachael

Curled in despair
Lost in pain
I watched

the world through frozen fingers
Too frightened to breathe
Too frightened to smile

Your love pierced the darkness
Breathed life into my heart
You showed me how to love
How to smile
How to live

You taught me
To turn my eyes to the stars
To dance with the rhythm of life
To breathe the rainbows
To sing with the larks

The smile I cast to the winds is due to you
The love I throw to the world is yours
You are my only
My truth
My heart is forever yours

(This is my story)
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  • 3 Seasons 2021.07.16 10:19

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    Forever Yours
  • 3 Seasons 2021.07.16 10:19

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    Great!
  • Rachael 2021.07.16 20:12

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    @3 Seasons Great reading 😊. Words that could be polished further are curled, breathed, larks. Try to soften the "ed" on breathed. Make the k stronger in larks..
  • 3 Seasons 2021.07.16 23:31

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    @Rachael thank you for the comments. Good day!
  • Rachael 2021.07.17 02:36

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    @Captain Timon Good effort ☺️. Listen again to rhythm, breathe, larks

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