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2021.07.16 09:57
Forever yours by Rachael

Curled in despair
Lost in pain
I watched the world through frozen fingers
Too frightened to breathe
Too frightened to smile

Your love pierced the darkness
Breathed life into my heart
You showed me how to love
How to smile
How to live

You taught me
To turn my eyes to the stars
To dance with the rhythm of life
To breathe the rainbows
To sing with the larks

The smile I cast to the winds is due to you
The love I throw to the world is yours
You are my only
My truth
My heart is forever yours

(This is my story)
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  • KoSooHyeon 2021.07.16 10:19

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    Forever Yours
  • KoSooHyeon 2021.07.16 10:19

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    Great!
  • Rachael 레이첼 2021.07.16 20:12

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    @KoSooHyeon Great reading 😊. Words that could be polished further are curled, breathed, larks. Try to soften the "ed" on breathed. Make the k stronger in larks..
  • KoSooHyeon 2021.07.16 23:31

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    @Rachael 레이첼 thank you for the comments. Good day!
  • Rachael 레이첼 2021.07.17 02:36

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    @Agent Johnny English Good effort ☺️. Listen again to rhythm, breathe, larks

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