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2020.07.24 09:51
English Writing. 英语作文

Simple tip to improve your writing ability:

Keep sentences short and simple. If you have to put a comma in a sentence, only use ONE comma MAX per sentence. 句子里最多用一个逗号!!

If you have a sentence with two commas, take one out and break it up into two different sentences. Please.

错:Mike has three girlfriends who love him, and he loves them all too, but he can only choose one.

对:Mike has three girlfriends who love him. He loves them all too, but he can only choose one.



Your standardized tests just want to test your ability to understand the hardest sentences. But when writing your own essays and papers, it is best to keep your sentences short and simple. I use this rule myself whenever I write.
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  • 琳Alina 2020.07.24 09:56

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    Mike是个渣男
  • Mike 麦克儿 2020.07.24 09:57

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    @琳Alina hhhhh
  • kaeyeolii 2020.07.24 09:58

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    可以修改我的发音嘛?😥
  • 胡洲67569939 2020.07.24 10:03

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    原来一个句子里只能有一个逗号啊,谢谢老师☺
  • Grace_Ni 2020.07.24 10:07

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    谢谢分享!
  • Hedy 2020.07.24 10:13

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    Oh, this is very helpful for us to learn to write.Thank you ,Mike.
  • Elva ͡° ͜ʖ ͡° 2020.07.24 10:20

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    @Mike 麦克 Thank you for your sharing
  • Christine 2020.07.24 10:33

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    Thanks for sharing your tips but I only noticed Mike 有3个女朋友
  • jggf 2020.07.24 10:51

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    If I had such a vivid example when I was in junior high school, I won’t have got a zero score on the exam🤣
  • Mike 麦克儿 2020.07.24 11:23

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    @kaeyeolii short and simple
  • kaeyeolii 2020.07.24 11:24

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    @Mike 麦克儿 现在呢老师
  • evonne 2020.07.24 13:44

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    Make a sentence: Don’t carry the joke too far at others .
  • Angie_zheng 2020.07.24 13:44

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    Thanks a ton, I think this lesson is especially for me. 😄
  • 已离线 2020.07.24 13:45

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    有人告诉过我,写作的原则就是Keep simple, stupid
  • Mike 麦克儿 2020.07.24 13:55

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    @Angie_zheng hhhh😃
  • Bradley 2020.07.24 16:05

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    学习了!
  • 鲸贝丶 2020.07.25 02:21

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    The fact tells me to be sober, I can't be the same as Mike, because I just want to be a sea King. 🤪
  • Mike 麦克儿 2020.07.25 03:04

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    @鲸贝丶 lol what😂
  • Vivian infinite whys 2020.07.25 13:44

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    That's very helpful, thank you Mike
  • 鲸贝丶 2020.07.26 02:01

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    @Mike 麦克儿 我想一个海王他更香,有一片海洋为什么执着一滴水?😂

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