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2020.02.19 16:55

Can someone tell me if this makes sense? This is one of my homework

assignments and I need help! My handwriting isn’t the best but I tried 😅
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  • dice 2020.02.19 16:57

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    That shit looks perfect, but make sure ゆ is supposed to be smaller
  • Calais 2020.02.19 16:57

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    @dice thank you!! 😊 I will correct that
  • Hayato 2020.02.19 16:58

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    Almost perfect, nice introduction!
  • ryota 2020.02.19 16:58

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    I can understand!!! But If you wanna say more naturally, you need to fix
  • Airi 2020.02.19 16:58

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    You are in perfect Japanese!😳
  • dice 2020.02.19 16:59

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    @Calais fo sho👌
  • Calais 2020.02.19 17:00

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    @ryota what can I do to say it more naturally? I want to get a good grade!
  • ryota 2020.02.19 17:04

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    @Calais はじめまして。私の名前はエルモシヨです。19歳です。私はアメリカのアリゾナ出身です。私はMCCの学生で今二年生です。日本語を専攻しています。よろしくお願いします。like this!
  • HeIIo Talk 2020.02.19 17:05

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    How u spell エルモツヨ?
  • Oka 2020.02.19 17:05

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    Very good (^-^)
  • Calais 2020.02.19 17:07

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    @ryota ohh I see! I haven’t learned kanji yet so maybe that’s why it doesn’t sound naturally 😅
  • Calais 2020.02.19 17:07

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    @HeIIo Talk my last name Hermosillo, it’s a Mexican last name and I think that’s how I would write in Katakana
  • NAO 2020.02.19 17:09

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    It's a very beautiful Japanese👏🏻👏🏻AMAZING🎉🎉🎉
  • ryota 2020.02.19 17:09

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    @Calais no! We usually connect a sentence you know
  • Calais 2020.02.19 17:09

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    @Scotch 孝一 ありがとうございました!
  • Naoki Fukuyama 2020.02.19 18:34

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    じょうずです😊
  • yusuke 2020.02.19 23:49

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    I think it's good to write hobbies and special skills because there will be margins.⛄
  • Yamaguchi Toru 2020.02.26 14:04

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    NICE!!!!!
  • Ryo 2020.03.06 09:45

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    Perfect 🍣

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