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"가자, 가고 싶은 곳이면 어디든 가자.
온 세상이 눈앞에 있다.
우리만의 것으로 만들자.
오늘은 항상 있

으니까 어제는 그냥 놔둬.”

Practicing my writing. Please correct me 🙏🏻

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  • Katherine VIP

    @luke Thank you for your help and encouragement 😄

  • luke

    Your writing is great when it comes to grammar and contents (What a great poem!)

  • Katherine VIP

    @사과꽃 고맙습니다! 당신은 최고예요! 😚

  • 사과꽃

    맘에 쏙 드는 글이에요!! 😍

  • Katherine VIP

    @김용환 @tapit Thank you! 😊

  • tapit

    Nothing to correct. 👍

  • 김용환

    Impressive!

  • Katherine VIP

    @Gene 😁

  • Gene

    👍👍👍

  • Katherine VIP

    @Lucy Thank you so much! I definitely want to learn the natural way 😊

  • Katherine VIP

    @Kawon You’re always so good to me, sweet friend! 😚

  • Lucy

    Wow you are really good at poetic writing👍 Your sentences are almost perfect, but maybe you can correct "있으니까" to "오니까" if you wanna say in more natural way :)

  • Kawon

    No need to correct..!!! Always your writing is !

  • Katherine VIP

    @Gung_Lim Thank you! It’s a relief 😃

  • Gung_Lim

    Perfect👍👍👍

  • Katherine VIP

    @Lazlo @김지혜 Thank you both! Maybe I am getting better after all 🤗🤗

  • 김지혜

    I cant correct your post, cuz you wrote well enough:) and very hopeful😊👍🏻good luck on your way 🍀🍀

  • Lazlo

    👍👍

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