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Scott Saad 向阳 Hameed

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2019.08.08 05:18

MY LATEST POEM: “MY ONLY REMAINING COMPANION 😔”

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MY ONLY REMAINING COMPANION

The moon seems alone tonight and so is my soul
I have no companion left to befriend me

I talk to the Moon but he remains silent
I guess silence is the best companion for me

In silence sometimes the subtle secrets are understood
Is that why silence was made a companion to me?

I glance at the Moon again and then realize
It has Earth as companion, what about me?

I have no one to converse on this sad night
In this universe is there anyone as lonely as me ?

I can now understand the pain of lovers of yore
Who spent their lonely days alone, like me

I vow tonight that I will not avoid such a dear friend
From now on, I will keep silence close to me
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  • De Vliegende Hollander 2019.08.08 05:48

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    It's great!!!!👍👍👍👍😀🙂😊
  • Scott Saad 向阳 Hameed 2019.08.08 05:49

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    @De Vliegende Hollander thanks Beautiful Mika
  • illia 2019.08.08 06:02

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    So depressing ..
  • Sophie 2019.08.08 06:02

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    wow, different style! And great!
  • Lena 2019.08.08 06:06

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    👍
  • Donovan 2019.08.08 06:10

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    So beautiful composition and words, bravo!
  • Natalie 2019.08.08 06:12

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    Touching!
  • Scott Saad 向阳 Hameed 2019.08.08 06:12

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    @Donovan gracias Juan!
  • Scott Saad 向阳 Hameed 2019.08.08 06:12

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    @illia yeah 😆
  • Scott Saad 向阳 Hameed 2019.08.08 06:12

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    @illia do not read it again or it may depress you 😂
  • Scott Saad 向阳 Hameed 2019.08.08 06:12

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    @Natalie thanks Beautiful
  • Scott Saad 向阳 Hameed 2019.08.08 06:13

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    @Lena thanks beautiful
  • Alice 2019.08.08 06:15

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    I can't read it at all. it makes feel so sad.it reminds me thinking about my best friend who left me... silent is not unique in the universe. to be happy silent as the moon and earth give to me.
  • illia 2019.08.08 06:17

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    @Scott Saad 向阳 Hameed its already depressed me..
  • 小米 2019.08.08 06:26

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    这些图片里我只看到了两个字:孤独
  • Anna 2019.08.08 06:56

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    It remains me life.. Thank you...
  • Lifeisbeautiful Ada 2019.08.08 07:04

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    What a forlorn poem! Sad and beautiful!
  • Scott Saad 向阳 Hameed 2019.08.08 07:20

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    @Lifeisbeautiful Ada thanks for the beautiful complement
  • Scott Saad 向阳 Hameed 2019.08.08 07:22

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    @Alice sorry to hear about your situation.
  • Scott Saad 向阳 Hameed 2019.08.08 07:22

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    @Anna thanks
  • Alice 2019.08.08 07:27

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    @Scott Saad 向阳 Hameed it's ok. I'm fine thank you
  • Lifeisbeautiful Ada 2019.08.08 13:28

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    @Scott Saad 向阳 Hameed That's my pleasure
  • Наталья 2019.08.08 14:45

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    The work is very expressive. Enough to read, and the imagination begins to work. Man, night, silence, huge moon and thoughts, thoughts, thoughts
  • Scott Saad 向阳 Hameed 2019.08.08 15:04

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    @Наталья thanks for the heartfelt comment
  • Scott Saad 向阳 Hameed 2019.08.09 01:18

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    @illia @Sophie @Lena @Donovan @Natalie @小米 @Anna @Lifeisbeautiful Ada Please give your feedback on my latest poem
  • yus 2019.08.10 01:23

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    Wooow

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