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Amber アンバー

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2020.09.07 13:31

Day 8: tell about your hometown

I don’t really have a hometown

, because I moved so much. But I’ll tell about one of the places I grew up.

As usual, thank you for your corrections!
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  • Hirokazu 2020.09.07 13:35

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    Bicycles appear twice in a sentence😂
  • Amber アンバー 2020.09.07 13:35

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    @Hirokazu oops! I lost track of what I was writing lol
  • Magog 2020.09.07 13:45

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    There was a redundancy of word 自転車. You wrote that twice in one sentence. Other than that, it was excellent. Please practice some Kanji Character for the next step. 😎
  • Amber アンバー 2020.09.07 13:46

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    @Magog thank you for your help! I noticed that after I posted 😅 I will definitely keep working on kanji! 💪🏻😭
  • Magog 2020.09.07 13:54

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    If you use more Kanaji it makes us easier to read as block. We can percieve those characters like stepping stones. That’s how we are trained to read faster.🌸
  • Amber アンバー 2020.09.07 13:56

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    @Magog I understand! I can recognize many kanji now, but I haven’t practiced writing them as much. I have a lot to work on!
  • Magog 2020.09.07 14:00

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    @Amber アンバー You can actually have or form image of the letter in your head without properly reading all the sentences. Wish you continued success. 🌸
  • Hiro ひろ 2020.09.07 14:03

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    私は いぜん よく 自転車で みずうみまで 行きました。 is more natural. but your writing is very good😄
  • Amber アンバー 2020.09.07 14:04

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    @Hiro ひろ Thank you! I made a silly mistake lol 🙈
  • Koji wtte 2020.09.07 20:42

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    大好でした -> 大好きでした
  • Koji wtte 2020.09.07 20:44

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    What a beautiful scene. I want to visit seashore now...😄
  • Marine 2020.09.08 12:48

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    私は小さな港町(みなとまち)に住んでいました。 よく自転車で湖までいきました。 Wonderful photos💗

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