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Scott Saad 向阳 Hameed

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2019.08.22 05:43

MY LATEST POEM: THE SERPENT 🐍

For those who have never experienced

love before
Let me be break it down to you, what it is, alright!

Love is not a game that you play tonight and then forget
It slowly pierces your soul from inside and outside

Love is in fact a pain and pleasure far beyond description
Love is the kind of pain that can keep you up all night

It’s a slow poison that feeds on your body yet still gives you pleasure
It’s an addiction that never lets go of you and eats you from inside

If you truly want to know the meaning of the love then ask me!
I have thousand scars to show you, from deep down inside!

Once you see them you will repent of having even said the word love!
You will run from this serpent, yes run for your very life
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  • carey 2019.08.22 05:46

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    HOw about entitling the poem with love ?
  • Scott Saad 向阳 Hameed 2019.08.22 05:49

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    @carey i want to surprise the reader 😉
  • Scott Saad 向阳 Hameed 2019.08.22 05:49

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    @carey and scare them about falling in love
  • Scott Saad 向阳 Hameed 2019.08.22 05:50

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    @carey or at least be very cautious
  • Asia 2019.08.22 05:51

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    I don't love scars
  • Asia 2019.08.22 05:52

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    I hate it
  • carey 2019.08.22 05:52

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    @Scott Saad 向阳 Hameed haha,i see.It feels good, beautiful and wonderful to fall in love, in most cases,lol
  • Scott Saad 向阳 Hameed 2019.08.22 05:53

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    @Asia do you mean the photo of scars?
  • Scott Saad 向阳 Hameed 2019.08.22 05:53

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    @Asia sorry i did not mean to offend anyone.
  • Scott Saad 向阳 Hameed 2019.08.22 05:53

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    @carey your experience?
  • 薛薛Yancy 2019.08.22 06:04

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    I am a recruiter for an English training school in Dalian, and we are currently recruiting foreign teachers for a few open teaching positions. If you’re interested in understanding more about the opportunity please contact me! We would love to hear from you!
  • Scott Saad 向阳 Hameed 2019.08.22 06:07

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    @薛薛Yancy hmmm. They are looking for beginner poets 😂
  • Scott Saad 向阳 Hameed 2019.08.22 06:09

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    @carey i agree with you in general. True Love is the greatest blessing overall. But pain is part of it. I do mention that in the middle of the poem
  • Lifeisbeautiful Ada 2019.08.22 06:18

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    You have a plenty of experiences
  • Scott Saad 向阳 Hameed 2019.08.22 06:21

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    @Lifeisbeautiful Ada thanks beautiful
  • гэйзон 2019.08.22 06:31

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    I can fill out my phone of this kind of picture but i cant teach el significado
  • carey 2019.08.22 06:55

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    @Scott Saad 向阳 Hameed yes,i agree with you. 😊
  • Princess공주 2019.08.22 07:04

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    It was fantabulous😍
  • Taanya 2019.08.22 07:26

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    Fantastic
  • Scott Saad 向阳 Hameed 2019.08.22 07:33

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    @Taanya thanks Taanya!
  • Scott Saad 向阳 Hameed 2019.08.22 07:33

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    @Princess공주 thanks Beautiful Princess!
  • Princess공주 2019.08.22 07:38

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    @Scott Saad 向阳 Hameed You're always welcome😊
  • La cereza GhOsT 2019.08.22 07:43

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    Use mildfulness when you fall in love. If you balance it both, you will never pain. Btw almost people don’t use it 😁
  • Scott Saad 向阳 Hameed 2019.08.22 07:45

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    @La cereza GhOsT all great points beautiful
  • Serge 2019.08.22 08:18

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    You say of love there's no such thing You only know the pain it brings(
  • Alice 2019.08.22 10:24

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    问世间情为何物,直叫人生死相许。
  • Наталья 2019.08.22 10:25

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    I really liked it. All your works cause a certain association. This moment is with the saying of the poet Yesenin
  • victoria 2019.08.22 10:57

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    True love is not scars or pain. What you describe is addictive and poisoning even toxicant. Love shouldn't be possessive! Just wish your love much happiness always and be happy too.
  • roji 2019.08.22 10:59

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    Woow fantastic 👏🏻
  • Scott Saad 向阳 Hameed 2019.08.22 16:48

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    @Anna Anna this is a beautiful narration! 🌹
  • Scott Saad 向阳 Hameed 2019.08.22 16:50

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    @гэйзон sorry I did not understand your comment
  • Scott Saad 向阳 Hameed 2019.08.22 16:51

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    @Serge wow. Beautiful lines Serge!
  • Scott Saad 向阳 Hameed 2019.08.22 16:51

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    @roji thanks. A 🌹 for a 🌹
  • Scott Saad 向阳 Hameed 2019.08.22 16:52

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    @victoria true love is not JUST scars and pains, i agree with you. But pain is a normal part of love
  • Scott Saad 向阳 Hameed 2019.08.22 16:53

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    @victoria i agree love should not be possessive. But at the same time, love defies any definition. In some cases it even is vengeful
  • Scott Saad 向阳 Hameed 2019.08.22 16:54

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    @Наталья thanks for the warm complement. Could you share something by the poet Yesenin?
  • Наталья 2019.08.22 17:17

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    @Scott Saad 向阳 Hameed This is a quote from the poet Yesenin. "Love is bathing, you must either dive headlong or not climb into the water at all. If you wander along the shore knee-deep in water, then you will be sprayed only with a spray, and you will freeze and get angry."
  • Scott Saad 向阳 Hameed 2019.08.22 19:11

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    @Наталья amazing and beautiful quote. He was someone who had experienced true love, only a fortunate few do
  • Serge 2019.08.23 00:27

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    @Scott Saad 向阳 Hameed it's the song of Boston, called I believe, find in internet)
  • Serge 2019.08.23 00:29

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    Bosson
  • Tracy 2019.08.24 13:38

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    After reading your poems and photos, I am very curious. What did the poet have experienced?
  • Scott Saad 向阳 Hameed 2019.08.25 01:10

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    @Tracy well i cannot post that as a comment 😳😏😷

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