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Paul

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Tonight I could see an interesting moon.
So I wrote a poem. It

's called:

🌔✨The Moon dance ✨🌔

The Moon shone brightly in the sky. A beacon beckoning out for help.

Stranded. It had nowhere to go! Perhaps It was stuck? Stuck amongst what appeared to be an almighty armada of massive warships. Imposing and threatenly. A chaotic traffic jam of metallic clouds.

Feeling overwhelmed by the clanging, scraping metal against metal. The moon gracefully melts itself away, now hidden inside itself. Dormant, still and defeated.

Then suddenly! Bursting forth, the moon makes its bold and last stand! Dancing boldly amongst the silvery clouds. It takes lead, conducting chaos back to order.

There is harmony in the sky once again.

Peace amongst the stars.

Comments

  • Paul

    @SHiHO yes! It's Shio's big musical heart! 💖 The one that brings joy and energy to everyone! 🤸🤸🤸❤️🧡💛💚💙💜💖
  • SHiHO Lifetime VIP

    @Paul I can see a big heart😍👍🏻❤️🧡💛💚💙💜💖ありがとう🥰
  • Paul

    @SHiHO thank you my friend!🎶✨🎶✨🎶💞✨🎶✨🎶✨🎶
  • Paul

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  • Paul

    @kurumi くるみー good morningくるみさん!oh really? I'm unfamiliar with this author 🤔🤔 Sounds good! So many wonderful poems, 俳句 from Japan 😍😍😍👌
  • Paul

    @Lydia your welcome! ☺️☺️🙏
  • kurumi くるみー

    おはよう!Paul😄 Reading your poem reminded me of Haruki Murakami's novel.☺🌸
  • Lydia Lifetime VIP

    @Paul Yay! I'm glad that nothing "jumps at you" in terms of English grammar and such. 😂 No, it's pretty clear what you meant even for a foreigner. Thanks for sharing!
  • Paul

    @Lydia no not that I could see! I really loved your lines The horde of ghostly shrouds. With dignity and grace. An impetuous spin! Seriously Wow!!!!😳 It captured what I was trying to say! You wrote a fantastic composition! I really appreciate the way you made a different spin on it! At first I was reluctant to post this, because I thought, is this going to be difficult for people to understand. All this confusing imagery? But, I'm really glad I did now. Thanks so much! 🙏☺️✨🌔
  • Chiara

    @Paul full moon soon✨✨
  • Lydia Lifetime VIP

    @Paul Thank you! I hope I didn't make any mistakes in it...
  • Paul

    @Chiara thank you my friend. 🌔☺️🥰 It was so beautiful last night. I wish you could have seen it on display too. So beautiful 🥰
  • Paul

    @Lydia wow!!!!! I like your words so much! 🥰🥰🥰🥰 I'm not really a writer but your words are more succinct and poetic. I think, better than mine 😅😅 thank you so much!!!
  • Lydia Lifetime VIP

    The Moon shone brightly in the sky — A beacon in the dark. The halo of the radiant light, The giant silver spark. The cruel wind entrapped the Moon With mighty heavy clouds. They gathered like a huge platoon — The horde of ghostly shrouds. The Moon was trying to elude And to unblock her way, But lost its hope To escape and fell into dismay. But, look, it's making one last stand To take the lead and win! It bursted forth and dodged the clouds In an impetuous spin! And then, again, it ruled the sky With dignity and grace, Conducting chaos back to order Up in the peaceful space.
  • Chiara

    Love your moon!!!
  • Poさん 포상 Lifetime VIP

      😟😧😯😲😌 ☁️☁️☁️☁️🌖☁️☁️☁️☁️
  • SHRÚTÍ

    It Beautiful.

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