久しぶりに英語書いとくね、これちゃんと読んで欲しい: me. I'm by no means an English professor but as a native I know what sounds natural. When I'm bored I'll go through moments on here and see this:
I see this all the time and it bothers
"Today I went to the park. I really like the park because the park is fun. I want to go to the park again soon. "
It's not natural and unnecessary to repeat your subject this many times. Think about how you can say what you want in the most simplist way. In this case:
"Today I went to the park. I like going there because it's fun. I want to go again soon."
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