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Scott Saad 向阳 Hameed

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2019.08.27 05:13

MY LATEST POEM: WONDERLAND

My heart yearns for your mere sight

, impatiently each moment
Like a survivor awaits arrival of a ship, stranded alone on an island

The pangs of your loss, suddenly erupted, surrounded my heart
Like the arrival of a violent tornado, devastating plain dry land

The loss of you, desolated my soul, turned it into a dry desert
Absolutely no life flourishes there, no sign, not even a strand

My eyes shed many tears for you, but finally they became dry
Your one vision can bring back the clouds, so graceful, so grand

When finally, your countenance appears to me out of nowhere
Tears of joy flow down from all heights, forming a grassland

To see the luminescence of your beauty, I rejoice with a laugher so bright
Like the surprise rain makes desert dwellers rejoice, their hearts expand

You are the very elixir of my spirit, i cannot deny this in anymore
With you finally by my side, this desolate realm, becomes a wonderland
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  • Taanya 2019.08.27 05:17

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    Very painful emotions, I couldn't even read till the end for the first time..
  • Sarah 2019.08.27 05:19

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    I like the second sentence.🌸🌸
  • Scott Saad 向阳 Hameed 2019.08.27 05:19

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    @Taanya Thanks Taanya! You really think it was painful? What part?
  • Scott Saad 向阳 Hameed 2019.08.27 05:20

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    @Sarah thanks Sarah. You mean this : Like a survivor awaits arrival of a ship, stranded alone on an island ?
  • Sarah 2019.08.27 05:22

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    @Scott Saad 向阳 Hameed yes,I like
  • Taanya 2019.08.27 05:27

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    @Scott Saad 向阳 Hameed I feel like that
  • Jennystark 2019.08.27 05:28

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    I pretty like the poem
  • Tatyаna 2019.08.27 05:36

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    Beautiful poem, you wrote it yourself?
  • Scott Saad 向阳 Hameed 2019.08.27 05:47

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    @Tatyаna thanks Tatyana! yes i did
  • Scott Saad 向阳 Hameed 2019.08.27 05:48

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    @Taanya broken hearts can feel the pain; it is a universal feeling 🌹
  • Scott Saad 向阳 Hameed 2019.08.27 05:48

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    @Sarah thanks Sarah!
  • Sarah 2019.08.27 05:53

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    @Scott Saad 向阳 Hameed You're great. Do you like writing poetry?
  • Scott Saad 向阳 Hameed 2019.08.27 05:57

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    @Sarah yes i enjoy it. It is a good means to express my deepest feelings
  • Наталья 2019.08.27 06:12

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    Your poem delighted me. you do not have to compare with someone. You are very individual and unique.
  • Scott Saad 向阳 Hameed 2019.08.27 06:29

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    @Наталья thanks for the beautiful complement!
  • Amina 2019.08.27 06:34

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    my English is of course very bad, but I understood a bit. probably if a man is in this state, then this woman is not reachable for him
  • 河图Trent 2019.08.27 06:54

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    吟的一首好诗,美国李白
  • Scott Saad 向阳 Hameed 2019.08.27 07:19

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    @Amina thanks Amina. it is a story about a man who has lost a woman (his lover) and the pain he feels. Finally, when the man gets back his woman, the happiness he gets. You may translate this poem into Russian using a translator app and you will get a good sense of the meaning
  • Scott Saad 向阳 Hameed 2019.08.27 07:23

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    @河图Trent thanks Trent!
  • Scott Saad 向阳 Hameed 2019.08.27 07:26

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    @Taanya were you able to completely read it?
  • Amina 2019.08.27 07:50

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    @Scott Saad 向阳 Hameed oh, I read quickly and probably missed that this man lost her. I thought he was dreaming about her
  • Princess공주 2019.08.27 08:19

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    👌👌😊
  • Jasper 2019.08.27 08:25

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    Woo perfect I like it so much. Is that written by you
  • Scott Saad 向阳 Hameed 2019.08.27 08:36

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    @Jasper thanks Jasper. yes
  • Scott Saad 向阳 Hameed 2019.08.27 08:36

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    @Princess공주 thanks 👸
  • Princess공주 2019.08.27 08:52

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    @Scott Saad 向阳 Hameed you're welcome😊
  • Has 2019.08.27 14:22

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    美丽

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