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Scott Saad 向阳 Hameed

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2019.08.09 01:12

MY LATEST POEM: “THE LOVERS PAIN”

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THE LOVERS PAIN

My love is the wild impetuous river running wild
Your heart is like a strong, firm, stern mountain

Oh how I wish to one day, to caress you with my arms
For once and all, make all your sternness feel in vain

Oh how I want to spray my waters of desire on you!
To grow trees and flowers, what a beautiful gain!

Yet, You push back my advances with a firm resolve
But i have the persistence like a never ending rain

You show me anger when I express my love to you
You push back my loving waves, without any strain

But I know that in love one should not lose hope
I secretly continue my unending work, like a deep ocean

The hope of that day makes me continue my craft
The day you will finally realize, YOU are my only passion

I will continue my advances towards you O beautiful
above you, beneath you around you, O stern Mountain

You WILL one day accept these advances from me
Your stern heart will also feel what i felt, the lovers pain!
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  • Lacigale 2019.08.09 01:31

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    The rhyming words make the poem be full of beauty and rhythm.
  • Scott Saad 向阳 Hameed 2019.08.09 01:53

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    @Lacigale thanks beautiful. You are so right. That is also what i like the most about poetry, the rhyming words
  • Lacigale 2019.08.09 02:29

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    @Scott Saad 向阳 Hameed The beauty between the lines is in the eyes and the rhythm is in the heart. 😊
  • Scott Saad 向阳 Hameed 2019.08.09 02:30

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    @Lacigale thanks for the beautiful complement
  • Lacigale 2019.08.09 02:31

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    @Scott Saad 向阳 Hameed My pleasure. 😊
  • Joskua 2019.08.09 03:29

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    So deep 👍 and beautiful ☺
  • ASMAHAN 2019.08.09 03:47

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    The sad love stories are strong enough
  • Scott Saad 向阳 Hameed 2019.08.09 03:48

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    @Joskua really? Thanks for the beautiful complement
  • Scott Saad 向阳 Hameed 2019.08.09 03:49

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    @ASMAHAN did you like it?
  • Rimma 2019.08.09 04:20

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    . It can be read endlessly. Beautiful, captures the imagination.
  • yuling xie 2019.08.09 04:24

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    Beautiful pics and beautiful poem 👍👍👏
  • Алексей Ельцов 2019.08.09 04:39

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    I like it
  • Scott Saad 向阳 Hameed 2019.08.09 06:09

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    @Алексей Ельцов thanks my Siberian good friend
  • Scott Saad 向阳 Hameed 2019.08.09 06:10

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    @Rimma thanks beautiful Rimma
  • Kanykei 2019.08.09 07:40

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    It's wonderful!!!)
  • ASMAHAN 2019.08.09 07:50

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    @Scott Saad 向阳 Hameed yes,I did
  • Scott Saad 向阳 Hameed 2019.08.09 07:50

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    @Kanykei thanks sweetheart
  • Scott Saad 向阳 Hameed 2019.08.09 08:04

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    @ASMAHAN good to hear! It is written from my heart. Mountains are always tough, won’t you agree?
  • ASMAHAN 2019.08.09 08:06

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    @Scott Saad 向阳 Hameed sure
  • Sophie 2019.08.09 15:09

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    Wonderful!
  • Rainbow 2019.08.09 15:09

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    I love this one. 😁😁 because I feel related to this poem since I am coming closer to someone lately.
  • Scott Saad 向阳 Hameed 2019.08.09 16:20

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    @Rainbow so are you the mountain or the river?
  • Scott Saad 向阳 Hameed 2019.08.09 16:21

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    @Sophie thanks my Sophie!
  • Scott Saad 向阳 Hameed 2019.08.09 16:34

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    @Rainbow 👏beautifully recited with passion
  • Rainbow 2019.08.10 08:20

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    @Scott Saad 向阳 Hameed I think I'm the snow he is the mountain. I want to fall slowly so that he doesn't run away😁
  • Scott Saad 向阳 Hameed 2019.08.10 08:51

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    @Rainbow nice one, i think you should write poetry 😃😃😃
  • Rainbow 2019.08.10 12:44

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    @Scott Saad 向阳 Hameed I can't write poetry. I said what I thought😳...

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