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goo1

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2021.08.23 19:18

Hey everyone!👋🏼

Here is another poem I've just read and recorded

, have a listen to my pronunciations and maybe you can have a go? Be brave, let's see how you do it! 👀

If I showed you my teardrops,
Would you collect them like rain,
Store them in jars,
That are labelled with "Pain",
Would you follow their tracks,
From my eyes down my cheeks,
As they write all the stories,
I'm too scared to speak,
Would you stop them with kisses,
Bring their flow to a halt,
As you teach me that pain,
Isn't always my fault,
Would you hold my face gently,
As you dry both my eyes,
And whisper the words,
"You're too precious to cry",
If I showed you my teardrops,
Would you show me your own,
And learn though we're lonely,
We're never alone.

All the best! 💯
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  • goo1 2021.08.23 19:24

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    @Yas_sine Hey! This was good! You can make it even better by reading more and listening to more pronunciations by Native speakers. Take care!
  • Yas_sine 2021.08.23 19:26

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    @goo1 thank you
  • Nour 2021.08.23 19:36

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    If I showed you my teardrops, Would you collect them like rain, Store them in jars, That are labelled with "Pain", Would you follow their tracks, From my eyes down my cheeks, As they write all the stories, I'm too scared to speak, Would you stop them with kisses, Bring their flow to a halt, As you teach me that pain, Isn't always my fault, Would you hold my face gently, As you dry both my eyes, And whisper the words, "You're too precious to cry", If I showed you my teardrops, Would you show me your own, And learn though we're lonely, We're never alone.
  • goo1 2021.08.23 19:45

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    @Judith Good one!
  • goo1 2021.08.23 19:45

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    @Mohammed Nice one!
  • goo1 2021.08.23 19:45

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    @Lucio Ledesma Keep it up Lucio!
  • goo1 2021.08.23 19:45

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    @Nour Nice one Aya!
  • goo1 2021.08.23 19:46

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    @Alien Good one!
  • goo1 2021.08.23 19:46

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    @Silvia Keep it up SilviaA
  • Alien 2021.08.23 19:47

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    @goo1 thanks
  • goo1 2021.08.23 19:58

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    @zahra Nice one!!
  • goo1 2021.08.23 19:59

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    @Marianna This was good!!
  • goo1 2021.08.23 21:16

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    @Cristiano Good one!
  • goo1 2021.08.23 21:16

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    @ Nice one!
  • goo1 2021.08.23 21:16

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    @Amal Keep it up!
  • Judith 2021.08.24 02:08

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    @goo1 thank you
  • lety 2021.08.24 03:27

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    Thank you so much.
  • Masuma Abdullayeva 2021.08.24 05:20

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    Güzel şiir
  • Maitha 2021.08.24 06:48

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    What is halt
  • Marianna 2021.08.24 08:20

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    @goo1 thanks
  • goo1 2021.08.24 10:57

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    @lety Good one
  • goo1 2021.08.24 10:57

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    @Merardo502 Nice one!
  • goo1 2021.08.24 10:57

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    @ASTRID Keep it up
  • goo1 2021.08.24 10:57

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    @Nora This was a good attempt
  • goo1 2021.08.24 10:57

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    @shxo Good one
  • goo1 2021.08.24 10:57

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    @Masuma Abdullayeva Evet aynen öyle
  • goo1 2021.08.24 10:57

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    @kansai Good one
  • goo1 2021.08.24 10:57

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    @Rodrigo Arias Nice one
  • goo1 2021.08.24 10:58

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    @Maitha Keep it up
  • goo1 2021.08.24 10:58

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    @Maitha halt means bring or come to an abrupt stop
  • goo1 2021.08.24 10:58

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    @ You're welcome! Keep it up
  • goo1 2021.08.24 10:58

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    @Nelson Villalobos Nice one
  • goo1 2021.08.24 10:58

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    @sireen Good one
  • goo1 2021.08.24 10:59

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    @My This was a good attempt
  • goo1 2021.08.24 10:59

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    @ar halima Keep up the reading and you should be better hopefully
  • My 2021.08.24 10:59

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    @goo1 thanks
  • carlos 2021.08.24 11:57

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    Thank you so much for you poem bro,
  • goo1 2021.08.24 12:14

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    @EsOo Good as always Esila!!!
  • goo1 2021.08.24 12:14

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    @Karla Nice one Karla!!
  • Fab 2021.08.24 12:35

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    How was it?
  • goo1 2021.08.24 14:44

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    @Tom Good one Tom!
  • goo1 2021.08.24 14:44

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    @Fab Yep, it was good!
  • goo1 2021.08.24 14:44

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    @J. Luis Nice one!!
  • goo1 2021.08.24 14:44

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    @Ikram 12 Good one!!
  • goo1 2021.08.24 14:44

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    @Zaaab Keep up the reading!
  • goo1 2021.08.24 14:44

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    @Rania Rania Nice one Rania!!
  • goo1 2021.08.24 14:44

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    @Mariana Rivera Keep it up Mariana!!
  • Rania Rania 2021.08.24 14:53

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    @goo1 thank youu
  • the Queen 2021.08.24 15:00

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    If I showed you my teardrops, Would you collect them like rain, Store them in jars, That are labelled with "Pain", Would you follow their tracks, From my eyes down my cheeks, As they write all the stories, I'm too scared to speak, Would you stop them with kisses, Bring their flow to a halt, As you teach me that pain, Isn't always my fault, Would you hold my face gently, As you dry both my eyes, And whisper the words, "You're too precious to cry", If I showed you my teardrops, Would you show me your own, And learn though we're lonely, We're never alone.
  • Helen 2021.08.24 15:38

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    Yo make me cry!!!😭
  • Flower Mail 2021.08.24 15:54

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    U wrote great ❤️
  • baraah 2021.08.24 16:10

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    thanks
  • Heriberto 2021.08.24 19:38

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    Very good poem, I love poetry. Im not ready to read outloud yet though.
  • Verónica 2021.08.24 20:27

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    Muy lindo y sensible
  • goo1 2021.08.24 22:04

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    @the Queen Good reading

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