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2021.08.23 19:18

Hey everyone!👋🏼

Here is another poem I've just read and recorded

, have a listen to my pronunciations and maybe you can have a go? Be brave, let's see how you do it! 👀

If I showed you my teardrops,
Would you collect them like rain,
Store them in jars,
That are labelled with "Pain",
Would you follow their tracks,
From my eyes down my cheeks,
As they write all the stories,
I'm too scared to speak,
Would you stop them with kisses,
Bring their flow to a halt,
As you teach me that pain,
Isn't always my fault,
Would you hold my face gently,
As you dry both my eyes,
And whisper the words,
"You're too precious to cry",
If I showed you my teardrops,
Would you show me your own,
And learn though we're lonely,
We're never alone.

All the best! 💯
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  • Yesevi 2021.08.23 19:24

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    @Yas_sine Hey! This was good! You can make it even better by reading more and listening to more pronunciations by Native speakers. Take care!
  • Yas_sine 2021.08.23 19:26

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    @Yesevi thank you
  • Nour 2021.08.23 19:36

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    If I showed you my teardrops, Would you collect them like rain, Store them in jars, That are labelled with "Pain", Would you follow their tracks, From my eyes down my cheeks, As they write all the stories, I'm too scared to speak, Would you stop them with kisses, Bring their flow to a halt, As you teach me that pain, Isn't always my fault, Would you hold my face gently, As you dry both my eyes, And whisper the words, "You're too precious to cry", If I showed you my teardrops, Would you show me your own, And learn though we're lonely, We're never alone.
  • Yesevi 2021.08.23 19:45

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    @Judith Good one!
  • Yesevi 2021.08.23 19:45

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    @Mohammed Nice one!
  • Yesevi 2021.08.23 19:45

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    @Lucio Ledesma Keep it up Lucio!
  • Yesevi 2021.08.23 19:45

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    @Nour Nice one Aya!
  • Yesevi 2021.08.23 19:46

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    @Aya آية Good one!
  • Yesevi 2021.08.23 19:46

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    @Silvia Keep it up SilviaA
  • Aya آية 2021.08.23 19:47

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    @Yesevi thanks
  • Yesevi 2021.08.23 19:58

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    @zahra Nice one!!
  • Yesevi 2021.08.23 19:59

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    @Marianna This was good!!
  • Yesevi 2021.08.23 21:16

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    @Lee Good one!
  • Yesevi 2021.08.23 21:16

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    @ Nice one!
  • Yesevi 2021.08.23 21:16

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    @Amal Keep it up!
  • Judith 2021.08.24 02:08

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    @Yesevi thank you
  • lety 2021.08.24 03:27

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    Thank you so much.
  • Masuma Abdullayeva 2021.08.24 05:20

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    Güzel şiir
  • Maitha 2021.08.24 06:48

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    What is halt
  • Marianna 2021.08.24 08:20

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    @Yesevi thanks
  • Yesevi 2021.08.24 10:57

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    @lety Good one
  • Yesevi 2021.08.24 10:57

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    @Merardo502 Nice one!
  • Yesevi 2021.08.24 10:57

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    @ASTRID Keep it up
  • Yesevi 2021.08.24 10:57

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    @Nora This was a good attempt
  • Yesevi 2021.08.24 10:57

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    @shxo Good one
  • Yesevi 2021.08.24 10:57

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    @Masuma Abdullayeva Evet aynen öyle
  • Yesevi 2021.08.24 10:57

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    @kansai Good one
  • Yesevi 2021.08.24 10:57

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    @Rodrigo Arias Nice one
  • Yesevi 2021.08.24 10:58

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    @Maitha Keep it up
  • Yesevi 2021.08.24 10:58

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    @Maitha halt means bring or come to an abrupt stop
  • Yesevi 2021.08.24 10:58

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    @ You're welcome! Keep it up
  • Yesevi 2021.08.24 10:58

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    @Nelson Villalobos Nice one
  • Yesevi 2021.08.24 10:58

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    @sireen Good one
  • Yesevi 2021.08.24 10:59

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    @My This was a good attempt
  • Yesevi 2021.08.24 10:59

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    @ar halima Keep up the reading and you should be better hopefully
  • My 2021.08.24 10:59

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    @Yesevi thanks
  • carlos 2021.08.24 11:57

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    Thank you so much for you poem bro,
  • Yesevi 2021.08.24 12:14

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    @EsOo Good as always Esila!!!
  • Yesevi 2021.08.24 12:14

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    @Karla Nice one Karla!!
  • Fab 2021.08.24 12:35

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    How was it?
  • Yesevi 2021.08.24 14:44

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    @Tom Good one Tom!
  • Yesevi 2021.08.24 14:44

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    @Fab Yep, it was good!
  • Yesevi 2021.08.24 14:44

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    @J. Luis Nice one!!
  • Yesevi 2021.08.24 14:44

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    @Ikram 12 Good one!!
  • Yesevi 2021.08.24 14:44

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    @Zaaab Keep up the reading!
  • Yesevi 2021.08.24 14:44

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    @Rania Rania Nice one Rania!!
  • Yesevi 2021.08.24 14:44

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    @Mariana Rivera Keep it up Mariana!!
  • Rania Rania 2021.08.24 14:53

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    @Yesevi thank youu
  • the Queen 2021.08.24 15:00

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    If I showed you my teardrops, Would you collect them like rain, Store them in jars, That are labelled with "Pain", Would you follow their tracks, From my eyes down my cheeks, As they write all the stories, I'm too scared to speak, Would you stop them with kisses, Bring their flow to a halt, As you teach me that pain, Isn't always my fault, Would you hold my face gently, As you dry both my eyes, And whisper the words, "You're too precious to cry", If I showed you my teardrops, Would you show me your own, And learn though we're lonely, We're never alone.
  • Helen 2021.08.24 15:38

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    Yo make me cry!!!😭
  • Flower Mail 2021.08.24 15:54

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    U wrote great ❤️
  • baraah 2021.08.24 16:10

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    thanks
  • Heriberto 2021.08.24 19:38

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    Very good poem, I love poetry. Im not ready to read outloud yet though.
  • Verónica 2021.08.24 20:27

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    Muy lindo y sensible
  • Yesevi 2021.08.24 22:04

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    @the Queen Good reading

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