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goo1

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2021.08.18 16:16

Hey everyone!👋🏼

Here is another poem I've just read and recorded

, have a listen to my pronunciations and maybe you can have a go? Be brave, let's see how you do it! 👀

Welcome to society,
We hope you enjoy your stay,
And please feel free to be yourself,
As long as it's in the right way,
Make sure you love your body,
Not too much or we'll tear you down,
We'll bully you for smiling,
And then wonder why you frown,
We'll tell you that you're worthless,
That you shouldn't make a sound,
And then cry with all the others,
As you're buried in the ground,
You can fall in love with anyone,
As long as it's who we choose,
And we'll let you have your opinions,
But please shape them to our views,
Welcome to society,
We promise that we won't deceive,
And one more rule now that you're here,
There's no way you can leave.

All the best! 💯
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  • Dipak wagh 2021.08.18 16:18

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    Really nice 👌
  • Wilson 2021.08.18 16:19

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    beautiful poem
  • Mahmud 2021.08.18 16:21

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    Nice
  • sheikha 2021.08.18 16:21

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    I like👏🏻
  • goo1 2021.08.18 16:22

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    @Dipak wagh Your turn!!
  • goo1 2021.08.18 16:22

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    @Wilson Have an attempt at reading!
  • goo1 2021.08.18 16:23

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    @Mahmud Give it a try at reading!
  • goo1 2021.08.18 16:23

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    @sheikha How about your reading? Be brave!
  • Mr chen 2021.08.18 16:23

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    That's awesome!
  • Jason Liang 2021.08.18 16:24

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    I like it
  • goo1 2021.08.18 16:31

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    @Abdulla Salah Hey! This was good! You can make it even better by reading more and listening to more pronunciations by Native speakers. Take care!
  • goo1 2021.08.18 16:31

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    @Jason Liang Why don't you try reading as well?
  • goo1 2021.08.18 16:31

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    @Mr chen Yep, now you could read it as well.
  • Jason Liang 2021.08.18 16:32

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    @goo1 my microphone is dead,im waiting for new one
  • goo1 2021.08.18 17:01

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    @Marianna This was a very good attempt, it was really good to listen to you. Very good reading, all good with pronunciations as well. Try to respond to my other posts as well so you could make it near Native level. All the best!
  • goo1 2021.08.18 17:01

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    @Nayeem Really good attempt, clear reading! Check out my other posts and see if you can do another good submission. Keep up the hard work!
  • goo1 2021.08.18 17:10

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    @Hazel Nice one Hazel! This was good!
  • goo1 2021.08.18 17:11

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    @EsOo Keep it up! You are constantly responding to my posts. Hopefully it helps.
  • Marianna 2021.08.18 17:12

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    @goo1 Really thanks a lot 🥰🥳
  • EsOo 2021.08.18 17:12

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    @goo1 thank you l like your posts🙏😊 so helpful
  • goo1 2021.08.18 17:13

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    @Vitor Manoel Nice one Vitor! This was good!
  • goo1 2021.08.18 17:13

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    @Shahd This was good! Keep it up!!
  • goo1 2021.08.18 17:14

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    @zahra Good one Zahra! This was a good attempt!
  • Shahd 2021.08.18 17:14

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    @goo1 Thanks
  • Vitor Manoel 2021.08.18 17:16

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    @goo1 Cheers mate! Could you tell what can I improve? 😃
  • zahra 2021.08.18 17:17

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    @goo1 Thanks😊
  • Nayeem 2021.08.18 18:21

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    @goo1 sure. Gradually i will record all the reading texts existing in your timeline
  • goo1 2021.08.18 19:21

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    @My Good one!!
  • goo1 2021.08.18 19:21

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    @Mohammed Nice one!!
  • goo1 2021.08.18 19:21

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    @Piu Keep it up Piu!!
  • goo1 2021.08.18 19:32

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    @M2ryam. A Good one Maryam!!
  • Mera farouk 2021.08.18 19:37

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    @goo1 i hope u listen to my record, and tell me ur opinion
  • Hazel 2021.08.18 19:38

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    @goo1 Thank you!
  • goo1 2021.08.18 19:39

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    @Mera farouk Sounds good! Keep it up!
  • goo1 2021.08.18 19:40

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    @Aysha Good one Ayesha! This was a good attempt at reading!
  • M2ryam. A 2021.08.18 19:42

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    @goo1 Thanks a lot
  • Mera farouk 2021.08.18 19:45

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    @goo1 thanks a lot 😍 but if there is something i've to focus on to improve it or would u like to give me advice to improve myself?!
  • goo1 2021.08.18 19:47

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    @Mera farouk nothing stands out too much, your reading is good.
  • Aysha 2021.08.18 19:52

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    @goo1 thank youuuuuuu 🙏
  • goo1 2021.08.18 21:50

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    @Manal This was good!!!
  • goo1 2021.08.18 21:50

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    @Jesus Castellanos Nice one Jesus!!
  • Jesus Castellanos 2021.08.18 22:58

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    @goo1 thanks Ahmet, have a nice day.
  • Olga 2021.08.19 00:42

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    Please correct me! Thanks you in advance 🤗🌻
  • Vitor Manoel 2021.08.19 01:03

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    @goo1 Okay mate, thank you so much. 🤝
  • AMAL 2021.08.19 02:19

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    Whose is this poem?
  • goo1 2021.08.19 03:36

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    @Veronica Nice one Veronica! This was good!
  • goo1 2021.08.19 03:36

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    @AMAL Good one Amal!! Keep it up!!
  • goo1 2021.08.19 03:36

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    @AMAL Not sure who the poem author is.
  • goo1 2021.08.19 03:37

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    @Miguel Z. This was a good attempt like your previous ones Miguel!! Keep it up!!
  • Miguel Z. 2021.08.19 03:43

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    @goo1 Thank you!
  • Piu 2021.08.19 04:19

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    @goo1 thank you, sir,
  • goo1 2021.08.19 11:14

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    @deleted Good one!!
  • goo1 2021.08.19 11:14

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    @stone Keep it up!!
  • stone 2021.08.19 11:49

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    @goo1 what's mean
  • goo1 2021.08.19 19:20

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    @Mennaمِنَّه Nice one!!
  • goo1 2021.08.20 10:08

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    @Jason Liang Good one Jason!!

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