作者名称 国旗国籍

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2020.01.13 08:27

The Easiest Way to Make Your English Sentences Sophisticated

--> ADD VERB-ING MODIFIERS

Beginner Sentence(s):

For six years, BTS has been striving to make music that is not only fun, but also emotionally and culturally relevant to young people all over the world. THIS HAS MADE them a global powerhouse to be reckoned with.

More Sophisticated:

For six years, BTS has been striving to make music that is not only fun, but also emotionally and culturally relevant to young people all over the world, MAKING them a global powerhouse to be reckoned with.

Let me know with any questions.
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  • 마루 2020.01.13 08:30

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    Thanks!
  • Grace 2020.01.13 08:45

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    What are omitred? I mean something is omitted and make became making, right?🤔
  • Claire 2020.01.14 16:19

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    Thanks for the tip 👍
  • Gi 2020.01.15 05:40

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    @Claire 😃😃
  • Gi 2020.01.15 05:41

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    @Grace This has made is omitted and replaced by making

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