作者名称 国旗国籍

Katherine vip

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2019.08.19 12:39

"가자, 가고 싶은 곳이면 어디든 가자.
온 세상이 눈앞에 있다.
우리만의 것으로 만들자.
오늘은 항상 있

으니까 어제는 그냥 놔둬.”

Practicing my writing. Please correct me 🙏🏻
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  • Lazlo 2019.08.19 12:41

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    👍👍
  • 김지혜 2019.08.19 12:42

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    I cant correct your post, cuz you wrote well enough:) and very hopeful😊👍🏻good luck on your way 🍀🍀
  • Katherine 2019.08.19 12:43

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    @Lazlo @김지혜 Thank you both! Maybe I am getting better after all 🤗🤗
  • Gung_Lim 2019.08.19 12:43

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    Perfect👍👍👍
  • Katherine 2019.08.19 12:48

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    @Gung_Lim Thank you! It’s a relief 😃
  • Kawon 2019.08.19 12:55

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    No need to correct..!!! Always your writing is !
  • Lucy 2019.08.19 12:56

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    Wow you are really good at poetic writing👍 Your sentences are almost perfect, but maybe you can correct "있으니까" to "오니까" if you wanna say in more natural way :)
  • Katherine 2019.08.19 12:57

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    @Kawon You’re always so good to me, sweet friend! 😚
  • Katherine 2019.08.19 12:57

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    @Lucy Thank you so much! I definitely want to learn the natural way 😊
  • Gene 2019.08.19 13:03

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    👍👍👍
  • Katherine 2019.08.19 13:13

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    @Gene 😁
  • 김용환 2019.08.19 13:23

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    Impressive!
  • tapit 2019.08.19 13:36

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    Nothing to correct. 👍
  • Katherine 2019.08.19 13:51

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    @김용환 @tapit Thank you! 😊
  • 사과꽃 2019.08.19 14:40

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    맘에 쏙 드는 글이에요!! 😍
  • Katherine 2019.08.19 15:19

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    @사과꽃 고맙습니다! 당신은 최고예요! 😚
  • luke 2019.08.19 20:35

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    Your writing is great when it comes to grammar and contents (What a great poem!)
  • Katherine 2019.08.19 20:52

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    @luke Thank you for your help and encouragement 😄

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