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Scott Saad 向阳 Hameed

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2019.08.10 00:34

MY LATEST POEM: “MESSENGERS OF MY EYES 😢 “
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MESSENGERS OF MY EYES

I finally realized the depth of my love for you
When warm tears began to roll down my eyes

My heart started beating faster and harder
When suddenly, your face came in front of my eyes

Why do i feel a sharp and deep pain in my heart?
For your loving face, i felt a deep longing in my eyes

After you had left me, you asked me if I still loved you
Are you blind, did you not see the dampness in my eyes?

Yet you were cruel, you kept persisting on that question
I could barely talk, speechless, kept wiping my eyes

I’ve always denied that I loved you from my heart
Yet today, my tears are messengers of my heart, my eyes

I hate my tears as they betrayed me by exposing my secret
They expose the feelings, hidden deep in my heart, my eyes

My tears are like overflowing streams after snow melt
Flowing down sheer mountain heights, my eyes

Oh when will the snow completely melt, spring will come?
Until then Sun of sorrow melts and hurts my eyes?

My heart now quivers each time I am reminded of you
Why me? Why heart break? oh heart! my tears, my eyes
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  • Алексей Ельцов 2019.08.10 00:47

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    It's pretty sad
  • Scott Saad 向阳 Hameed 2019.08.10 00:50

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    @Алексей Ельцов yeah! Life can be that way sometimes
  • 折花客 2019.08.10 00:52

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    眼泪的存在,是为了证明悲伤不是一场幻觉
  • Scott Saad 向阳 Hameed 2019.08.10 00:54

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    @折花客 thanks that is a profound point that you made
  • Lifeisbeautiful Ada 2019.08.10 00:59

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    Oh, my tears! I'm so moving!
  • Scott Saad 向阳 Hameed 2019.08.10 01:00

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    @Lifeisbeautiful Ada i did not have an idea my words can affect you this way. Sorry and thanks
  • Lifeisbeautiful Ada 2019.08.10 01:02

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    @Scott Saad 向阳 Hameed You are welcome. I'm happy to read your poem. That's very touching
  • Lacigale 2019.08.10 01:07

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    Tears are the smallest man-made sea. Once in a moment, you could hear the sound of the sea.
  • yus 2019.08.10 01:09

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    Wooow
  • Scott Saad 向阳 Hameed 2019.08.10 01:20

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    @miss d i did not understand your comment. It may be the translator
  • Scott Saad 向阳 Hameed 2019.08.10 01:21

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    @yus wow or WoooW ? That is the first time i have seen that word 😉
  • Scott Saad 向阳 Hameed 2019.08.10 01:21

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    @Lacigale wow! Truly profound!
  • 𝙰𝚂𝙼𝙰𝙷𝙰𝙽 2019.08.10 02:04

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    Only a broken heart can be able to understand your poem. Good poem 👍🏻
  • miss d 2019.08.10 02:09

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    @Scott Saad 向阳 Hameed 😢😢😢
  • Scott Saad 向阳 Hameed 2019.08.10 02:45

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    @miss d thanks beautiful
  • Carmen Sierra 🤠 2019.08.10 03:12

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    Porqué la tristeza se nota primero en los ojos? 👀 Bonito poema. 😢 Pero muy triste.
  • Scott Saad 向阳 Hameed 2019.08.10 03:16

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    Thanks and sorry if i depressed you. Beautiful comment
  • Je_m 2019.08.10 04:46

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    It's beautiful and sad at the same time, such deep feelings!
  • Scott Saad 向阳 Hameed 2019.08.10 04:46

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    @Je_m thanks for the heartfelt feedback
  • Alice 2019.08.10 05:17

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    only person with true and deep love can understand what hurt is from your essay. it truly happens to life. some of these people who love each other,they hard to be together from different reasons.
  • Alice 2019.08.10 05:21

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    @Je_m no beautiful sad feeling. it's very bad for person who is heartbreaking.
  • yuling xie 2019.08.10 05:23

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    ☀☀
  • Scott Saad 向阳 Hameed 2019.08.10 05:29

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    @yuling xie thanks beautiful bella Piaoliang 😉
  • yuling xie 2019.08.10 05:30

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    @Scott Saad 向阳 Hameed 😃you are welcome
  • Scott Saad 向阳 Hameed 2019.08.10 05:30

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    @Alice thanks sweetheart
  • Scott Saad 向阳 Hameed 2019.08.10 05:33

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    @Alice love has heartbreak. No one’s fault. It’s the nature of love
  • Scott Saad 向阳 Hameed 2019.08.10 05:34

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    @yuling xie 😚
  • Je_m 2019.08.10 05:54

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    @Alice Actually I meant that poetry is beautiful, even if it's sad. What's wrong?
  • Scott Saad 向阳 Hameed 2019.08.10 06:00

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    @Je_m thanks beautiful. You are a sweetheart!
  • Alice 2019.08.10 06:09

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    @Je_m then I must be misunderstanding...
  • Scott Saad 向阳 Hameed 2019.08.10 06:21

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    @Alice ?
  • Rimma 2019.08.10 11:37

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    Я в восторге каждый раз, когда читаю твои поэмы. Мысли глубокие...Спасибо за работу, за то, что поделился. I am delighted every time I read your poems. Deep thoughts ... Thank you for the work, for sharing.
  • Scott Saad 向阳 Hameed 2019.08.11 04:18

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    @Rimma thanks my sweetheart. Your comments move me in my heart!

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