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srnn

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2019.09.29 16:35

Quick Draft of a poem written by me✒️📝, pardon the mistakes🙏



You are the forgotten spring of my life
Which I failed to Cherish.
Yes I am fool who couldn't understand it.

When we walked hand in hand.
Talked from dusk to dawn.
Forgetting time, forgetting our pain.
Yet I left our relation unnamed

When all I gifted you more was pain
But you endured it without a complain
I made your life hell, after all
what else can a devil be good at.

Now that you have gone.
Wish I would have confessed to you earlier.
This is what I deserve, a life full of guilt and pain
For leaving our relation unnamed

You are the forgotten spring of my life
Which I failed to Cherish.
Yes I am fool who couldn't understand it.
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  • Mit 2019.10.11 11:41

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    👏👏👏
  • 不放香菜 2020.02.16 16:17

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    写得很棒!Well done!
  • 葬爱狂少 2020.02.26 09:44

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    翻译一下吧太长了
  • Agony 2020.03.23 14:45

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    HIHello there
  • srnn 2020.03.23 15:08

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    @Agony hello
  • Agony 2020.03.23 15:12

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    @srnn @sareen where are you from
  • srnn 2020.03.23 15:22

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    @Agony from india
  • Agony 2020.03.23 15:25

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    @srnn @sareen I'm from China, have you been to China
  • srnn 2020.03.23 15:28

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    @Agony no I haven't, but would love to
  • Patani 2020.03.23 16:21

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    And maybe the forgotten spring is still waiting
  • srnn 2020.03.23 16:28

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    @Patani haha lol 😂 yes
  • Jocelyn 2020.03.24 14:58

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    beautiful and meaningful
  • srnn 2020.03.24 14:59

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    @Jocelyn thanks a lot for your appreciation
  • Jocelyn 2020.03.24 15:33

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    💕时无重至 华不再扬 我是个不懂你的小傻瓜💕 😊😊😊 我们😘 携手而行 娓娓而谈 从日出到黎明💕 忘了时间,慰了伤痛 但,我未望知晓你姓氏 💕💕💕 我给予你的💔是伤痛 但你悄然接受且无怨声 我给予你的💔如炼狱 就如同是恶魔👿所赐予 😜😜😜 由于你已离去😣 但我却未及时表露心意 这是我的罪过❤ 生活必将蒙受愧与伤痛 😌😌😌 时无重至 华不再扬💕 我是个不懂你的小傻瓜💕
  • Jocelyn 2020.03.24 15:34

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    how about it😘💕
  • srnn 2020.03.24 16:49

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    @Jocelyn this is wonderful 😍😍😍thanks for the translation along with emojis 😀👌👌👌👌
  • Jocelyn 2020.03.25 01:27

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    @srnn You're welcome, the best thing is worth to share to everyone.
  • Pai 2020.04.29 17:18

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    cool !!!

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