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2020.04.17 10:39

Hey everyone!

Shall we read a poem together? :)

Love so amazing

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My love for you is like the raging sea,
So powerful and deep it will forever be.
Through storm, wind, and heavy rain,
It will withstand every pain.
Our hearts are so pure and love so sweet.
I love you more with every heartbeat!

Cheers guys!~ have a great day! ☀️
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  • Hana 2020.04.17 11:00

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    @旁观者 好好听
  • Kevin 2020.04.17 22:21

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    @旁观者 hey there!~ thank you so much! Yes, my accent is a typical London accent haha. I loved your reading~ be careful though with some pronunciation like ‘through’ ‘withstand’ ~ keep it up!~
  • Kevin 2020.04.17 22:22

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    @Hermes hey Hermes!~ amazing job :) try to pronounce ‘pain’ with a clearer ‘ai’ sound. But the rest was great 😊
  • Kevin 2020.04.17 22:23

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    @樊嘉哲 hey there! Great job ~ make sure you pronounce all the syllable correctly as you may sometimes miss sounds in a word. Also, try to practice the ‘th’ sound too!~~ ^_^
  • Kevin 2020.04.17 22:25

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    @James Dylan Sen Hey James, great effort !~ be careful with the pronunciations ‘raging’ ‘through’ and ‘pure’. Also, try to make sure you are saying the correct words too. Sometimes you’ll say the wrong words, so try to read them clearly before saying it out loud.
  • Kevin 2020.04.17 22:27

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    @Nadia hey Nadia!~ you did very well! The biggest thing to improve is the ‘th’ sound!~ try to practice that and it’ll help your fluency a lot!
  • Kevin 2020.04.17 22:28

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    @Chris hey Chris. Great job. You took your time which is great. Try to avoid switching accents though, because it’ll sound less fluent~~ but otherwise, I like it.
  • Kevin 2020.04.17 22:30

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    @Emily Yuan hey Emily, great job ~ be careful with the pronunciation of ‘raging’ storm’ and ‘pure’. Sometimes you do not pronounce the ending sounds as clearly as the beginning, so try to make it consistent. The rest was great though :)
  • Kevin 2020.04.17 22:31

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    @Ding hey there~ amazing job! The only thing was the pronunciation of ‘withstand’!~ the rest was great though, keep it up!
  • Kevin 2020.04.17 22:31

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    @未来可期 you didn’t finish it all!~
  • Kevin 2020.04.17 22:32

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    @Scarlett Hey Scarlett, that was amazing !~~ I really loved it. It sounds exactly like a british person. I would have to hear the ‘it will’ again, but keep up the great job!
  • Kevin 2020.04.17 22:34

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    @ hey there~ great effort today. Please be careful of ‘raging’ ‘wind’ ‘pain’ and ‘pure’. The biggest problem I see is the ‘ai’ sound, or ‘ue’ sounds. So once you learn them, these words become easier to pronounce :)
  • Kevin 2020.04.17 22:35

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    @Sayhello hey :) amazing job. I couldn’t find any faults in the recording! So keep up the great work
  • Kevin 2020.04.17 22:36

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    @HOHO hey there ~ great job :) I think just work on building the confidence in speaking more. Ideally, you wouldn’t want to pause as much, but that’ll come with experience :)
  • Kevin 2020.04.17 22:42

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    @Zzzz hey there, amazing job!~ your pronunciation was great, maybe try to make the consonants more prominent and clear. But it’s a very minor thing :) well done
  • Kevin 2020.04.17 22:43

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    @Angela hey Angela, great job :) the biggest thing I heard was the ‘th’ sound in ‘through’. Try to make it clearer please ~ the rest was great~
  • Kevin 2020.04.17 22:45

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    @Sylviaかれい hey there!~ great job. Try to work more on your intonations~ with the wrong intonation, it may sound strange, so try to listen to the intonations and try to mimic it :)
  • Kevin 2020.04.17 22:47

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    @Ariel琪琪 Hey Ariel, I really like it :) try to pronounce the ‘th’ in ‘withstand’ ~~~ but the rest was amazing. Keep it up.
  • Kevin 2020.04.17 22:48

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    @Joyce hey Joyce, that was really good! Well done. Try to work on the ‘ai’ sound as in pain, and but I loved how you took your time :) keep it up~
  • Chris 2020.04.17 22:48

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    @Kevin thanks a lot Kevin!!
  • Scarlett 2020.04.17 22:50

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    @Kevin Is it correct? ''it will''
  • Kevin 2020.04.17 22:50

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    @Lifeisbeautiful Ada Hey there, great job :) there wasn’t any major pronunciation issues I could hear. But consider making the consonants sound clearer and we don’t want elongate sounds when we don’t need to.
  • Kevin 2020.04.17 22:53

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    @Alice Hey Alice, thank you so much :) you did very well !~ I loved the passion when you read it. Please be careful with the pronunciation of ’through’~~ the rest was great.
  • Kevin 2020.04.17 22:55

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    @Sunny hey there, you did very well ~ please be careful with the pronunciation of ‘withstand’ ~ so try to work on the ‘th’ sound more. I can hear American influence in your accent.
  • Kevin 2020.04.17 22:58

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    @Angie_zheng Hey Angela, you did very well!~ there were some words in which you say them faster than others, so be careful of that. The rest was great. Just need to work on improving the clarity of the sounds.
  • Sunny 2020.04.17 22:58

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    @Kevin Thank you.I'll be careful.☺☺
  • Kevin 2020.04.17 22:59

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    @Bertha Hey there~ amazing job!~ I really loved it. There wasn’t too much to say because it was very good! So keep up the great work.
  • Kevin 2020.04.17 23:00

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    @同心 hey there. I loved it. You took your time which was very good. So maybe try to say it faster in order to sounds more fluent. But pronunciation was really good, so well done!!!
  • Kevin 2020.04.17 23:02

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    @亚敏. hey there, you did great. I loved it. You took your time and pronunciation was very good. I love the background music too 😊
  • Kevin 2020.04.17 23:03

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    @Lacy hey there, great job today. Be careful with the ‘th’ sound. We want it to sound clearer please!~ the rest sound very good, so keep it up :)
  • Kevin 2020.04.17 23:05

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    @Jesse J Hey Jesse, amazing job !~ I loved it. There wasn’t really any errors in the recording, so keep up the great work and I hope to listen to more from you in the future :)
  • Kevin 2020.04.17 23:06

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    @Da jeong Hey Da Jeong, great job :) I really liked it. The way you say ‘through’ is used in some accents, but I think using the ‘th’ sound will be more natural and commonly used. The rest was perfect, so keep it up :)
  • Kevin 2020.04.17 23:09

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    @Katherine Meow Hey there, amazing work. It sounded very good!~ there actually wasn’t anything I heard which you can improve on. I can hear some American influence, but that’s fine :)
  • Kevin 2020.04.17 23:10

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    @Amily Sure :) you did very well! There were some pronunciation errors in ‘sea’ and ‘wind’, but the rest was great :) keep up the great work.
  • Kevin 2020.04.17 23:12

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    @Jenny hey Jenny, you did very well. The biggest issues are the ‘th’ sound in ‘through’ and ‘pure’. Thing of it like pyure. So there actually has a y sound after the p :) but great job.
  • Kevin 2020.04.17 23:14

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    @Shishi Hey there!~ wow! You did so good. I can see you’ve improved a lot! It’s great you are slowing down the words more. The biggest thing I heard was the ‘th’ sound in through. It can be pronounced in different ways. I prefer the ‘th’ sound like in ‘the’. But other than that, amazing!
  • Kevin 2020.04.17 23:15

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    @Joe Hey Joe, you did very well. The biggest thing I would say is to try and elongate the sounds more. We don’t want them to sound quite sharp/ fast, so try to slow it down a little more please. Also, the ‘th’ sound in through!~
  • Kevin 2020.04.17 23:16

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    @Edward Hey there, you did very good! The biggest thing is to try to practice the ‘th’ sound. We don’t want an s sound, but the th one!!~ but the rest was very well done :)
  • Kevin 2020.04.17 23:18

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    @Natsu なつ Hey there :) great effort :) be careful with the words: ‘raging’ ‘through’ and ‘rain’. The biggest thing to work on is the r/l sound. Sometimes it’s hard to distinguish them both, so please try to work on making them sound clearer ~~ :)
  • Kevin 2020.04.17 23:20

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    @Sherl Hey sherl, I feel there is something going on where you don’t know what to do with your tongue at times. So the sounds are not as clear as they should be. Try to articulate more and make the consonant and sounds more prominent ~~
  • Kevin 2020.04.17 23:21

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    @sust Hey there, you did so good! I can see you’ve made great progress! I am very impressed. Continue on working on making the sounds as clear as you can. Opening the mouth more and also paying attention to the consonants too. We don’t want to miss a sound!~ ^_^ but amazing job!
  • Kevin 2020.04.17 23:21

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    @Scarlett yup, sounds perfect
  • Scarlett 2020.04.17 23:24

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    @Kevin Thank you so much!❤💕
  • Jenny 2020.04.18 00:00

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    @Kevin Thank u so much,Kevin,happy weekend!
  • Emily Yuan 2020.04.18 00:03

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    @Kevin Thank you☺
  • 樊嘉哲 2020.04.18 00:20

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    @Kevin ok 👌 thank you ☺️
  • Angie_zheng 2020.04.18 01:14

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    Through
  • Angie_zheng 2020.04.18 01:14

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    @Kevin Thanks a million 🙏🙏
  • Natsu なつ 2020.04.18 01:47

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    @Kevin Thank you for your kindness 😊
  • Bertha 2020.04.18 02:15

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    @Kevin thank you a lot!❤️
  • Katherine Meow 2020.04.18 02:33

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    @Kevin Thank you for your listening and commenting! I really appreciate it! ☺
  • Zzzz 2020.04.18 02:39

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    @Kevin thank you for your compliment, I'll keep practising.😄
  • 同心 2020.04.18 02:45

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    @Kevin wow😄Thank you very much !
  • Lifeisbeautiful Ada 2020.04.18 02:57

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    @Kevin Thank you! I will listen to your reading more and practice more then try it here again 🌹

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