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Hey everyone!

Shall we read a poem together? :)

Love so amazing

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My love for you is like the raging sea,
So powerful and deep it will forever be.
Through storm, wind, and heavy rain,
It will withstand every pain.
Our hearts are so pure and love so sweet.
I love you more with every heartbeat!

Cheers guys!~ have a great day! ☀️

Comments

  • Yuan

    oh I missed again😥
  • Delphine

    😜
  • Lacy

    @Kevin Thank you so much
  • Sylviaかれい

    @Kevin thanks a lot
  • Ariel琪琪

    @Kevin Thanks a lot!!! I really like your accent and sound💕
  • Ding Lifetime VIP

    @Kevin Thank you 🙏
  • Jesse J

    @Kevin Thank you, Kevin. No prob, I will try more in future.😁
  • Shishi

    @Kevin thanks
  • James Dylan Sen

    @Kevin Okay i will be careful next time
  • Lifeisbeautiful Ada

    @Kevin Thank you! I will listen to your reading more and practice more then try it here again 🌹
  • 同心

    @Kevin wow😄Thank you very much !
  • Zzzz

    @Kevin thank you for your compliment, I'll keep practising.😄
  • Katherine Meow

    @Kevin Thank you for your listening and commenting! I really appreciate it! ☺
  • Molly

    @Kevin thank you a lot!❤️
  • Natsu なつ

    @Kevin Thank you for your kindness 😊
  • Angie_zheng

    @Kevin Thanks a million 🙏🙏
  • Angie_zheng

    Through
  • 樊嘉哲

    @Kevin ok 👌 thank you ☺️
  • Emily Yuan

    @Kevin Thank you☺
  • Jenny

    @Kevin Thank u so much,Kevin,happy weekend!
  • Scarlett

    @Kevin Thank you so much!❤💕
  • Kevin Lifetime VIP

    @Scarlett yup, sounds perfect
  • Kevin Lifetime VIP

    @sust Hey there, you did so good! I can see you’ve made great progress! I am very impressed. Continue on working on making the sounds as clear as you can. Opening the mouth more and also paying attention to the consonants too. We don’t want to miss a sound!~ ^_^ but amazing job!
  • Kevin Lifetime VIP

    @Sherl Hey sherl, I feel there is something going on where you don’t know what to do with your tongue at times. So the sounds are not as clear as they should be. Try to articulate more and make the consonant and sounds more prominent ~~
  • Kevin Lifetime VIP

    @Natsu なつ Hey there :) great effort :) be careful with the words: ‘raging’ ‘through’ and ‘rain’. The biggest thing to work on is the r/l sound. Sometimes it’s hard to distinguish them both, so please try to work on making them sound clearer ~~ :)
  • Kevin Lifetime VIP

    @Edward Hey there, you did very good! The biggest thing is to try to practice the ‘th’ sound. We don’t want an s sound, but the th one!!~ but the rest was very well done :)
  • Kevin Lifetime VIP

    @Joe Hey Joe, you did very well. The biggest thing I would say is to try and elongate the sounds more. We don’t want them to sound quite sharp/ fast, so try to slow it down a little more please. Also, the ‘th’ sound in through!~
  • Kevin Lifetime VIP

    @Shishi Hey there!~ wow! You did so good. I can see you’ve improved a lot! It’s great you are slowing down the words more. The biggest thing I heard was the ‘th’ sound in through. It can be pronounced in different ways. I prefer the ‘th’ sound like in ‘the’. But other than that, amazing!
  • Kevin Lifetime VIP

    @Jenny hey Jenny, you did very well. The biggest issues are the ‘th’ sound in ‘through’ and ‘pure’. Thing of it like pyure. So there actually has a y sound after the p :) but great job.
  • Kevin Lifetime VIP

    @Amily Sure :) you did very well! There were some pronunciation errors in ‘sea’ and ‘wind’, but the rest was great :) keep up the great work.
  • Kevin Lifetime VIP

    @Katherine Meow Hey there, amazing work. It sounded very good!~ there actually wasn’t anything I heard which you can improve on. I can hear some American influence, but that’s fine :)
  • Kevin Lifetime VIP

    @Da jeong Hey Da Jeong, great job :) I really liked it. The way you say ‘through’ is used in some accents, but I think using the ‘th’ sound will be more natural and commonly used. The rest was perfect, so keep it up :)
  • Kevin Lifetime VIP

    @Jesse J Hey Jesse, amazing job !~ I loved it. There wasn’t really any errors in the recording, so keep up the great work and I hope to listen to more from you in the future :)
  • Kevin Lifetime VIP

    @Lacy hey there, great job today. Be careful with the ‘th’ sound. We want it to sound clearer please!~ the rest sound very good, so keep it up :)
  • Kevin Lifetime VIP

    @亚敏. hey there, you did great. I loved it. You took your time and pronunciation was very good. I love the background music too 😊
  • Kevin Lifetime VIP

    @同心 hey there. I loved it. You took your time which was very good. So maybe try to say it faster in order to sounds more fluent. But pronunciation was really good, so well done!!!
  • Kevin Lifetime VIP

    @Molly Hey there~ amazing job!~ I really loved it. There wasn’t too much to say because it was very good! So keep up the great work.
  • Sunny

    @Kevin Thank you.I'll be careful.☺☺
  • Kevin Lifetime VIP

    @Angie_zheng Hey Angela, you did very well!~ there were some words in which you say them faster than others, so be careful of that. The rest was great. Just need to work on improving the clarity of the sounds.
  • Kevin Lifetime VIP

    @Sunny hey there, you did very well ~ please be careful with the pronunciation of ‘withstand’ ~ so try to work on the ‘th’ sound more. I can hear American influence in your accent.
  • Kevin Lifetime VIP

    @Alice Hey Alice, thank you so much :) you did very well !~ I loved the passion when you read it. Please be careful with the pronunciation of ’through’~~ the rest was great.
  • Kevin Lifetime VIP

    @Lifeisbeautiful Ada Hey there, great job :) there wasn’t any major pronunciation issues I could hear. But consider making the consonants sound clearer and we don’t want elongate sounds when we don’t need to.
  • Scarlett

    @Kevin Is it correct? ''it will''
  • Chris

    @Kevin thanks a lot Kevin!!
  • Kevin Lifetime VIP

    @Joyce hey Joyce, that was really good! Well done. Try to work on the ‘ai’ sound as in pain, and but I loved how you took your time :) keep it up~
  • Kevin Lifetime VIP

    @Ariel琪琪 Hey Ariel, I really like it :) try to pronounce the ‘th’ in ‘withstand’ ~~~ but the rest was amazing. Keep it up.
  • Kevin Lifetime VIP

    @Sylviaかれい hey there!~ great job. Try to work more on your intonations~ with the wrong intonation, it may sound strange, so try to listen to the intonations and try to mimic it :)
  • Kevin Lifetime VIP

    @Angela hey Angela, great job :) the biggest thing I heard was the ‘th’ sound in ‘through’. Try to make it clearer please ~ the rest was great~
  • Kevin Lifetime VIP

    @Zzzz hey there, amazing job!~ your pronunciation was great, maybe try to make the consonants more prominent and clear. But it’s a very minor thing :) well done
  • Kevin Lifetime VIP

    @HOHO hey there ~ great job :) I think just work on building the confidence in speaking more. Ideally, you wouldn’t want to pause as much, but that’ll come with experience :)
  • Kevin Lifetime VIP

    @prettyinsideout hey :) amazing job. I couldn’t find any faults in the recording! So keep up the great work
  • Kevin Lifetime VIP

    @ hey there~ great effort today. Please be careful of ‘raging’ ‘wind’ ‘pain’ and ‘pure’. The biggest problem I see is the ‘ai’ sound, or ‘ue’ sounds. So once you learn them, these words become easier to pronounce :)
  • Kevin Lifetime VIP

    @Scarlett Hey Scarlett, that was amazing !~~ I really loved it. It sounds exactly like a british person. I would have to hear the ‘it will’ again, but keep up the great job!
  • Kevin Lifetime VIP

    @未来可期 you didn’t finish it all!~
  • Kevin Lifetime VIP

    @Ding hey there~ amazing job! The only thing was the pronunciation of ‘withstand’!~ the rest was great though, keep it up!
  • Kevin Lifetime VIP

    @Emily Yuan hey Emily, great job ~ be careful with the pronunciation of ‘raging’ storm’ and ‘pure’. Sometimes you do not pronounce the ending sounds as clearly as the beginning, so try to make it consistent. The rest was great though :)
  • Kevin Lifetime VIP

    @Chris hey Chris. Great job. You took your time which is great. Try to avoid switching accents though, because it’ll sound less fluent~~ but otherwise, I like it.
  • Kevin Lifetime VIP

    @Cecilia hey Nadia!~ you did very well! The biggest thing to improve is the ‘th’ sound!~ try to practice that and it’ll help your fluency a lot!
  • Kevin Lifetime VIP

    @James Dylan Sen Hey James, great effort !~ be careful with the pronunciations ‘raging’ ‘through’ and ‘pure’. Also, try to make sure you are saying the correct words too. Sometimes you’ll say the wrong words, so try to read them clearly before saying it out loud.
  • Kevin Lifetime VIP

    @樊嘉哲 hey there! Great job ~ make sure you pronounce all the syllable correctly as you may sometimes miss sounds in a word. Also, try to practice the ‘th’ sound too!~~ ^_^
  • Kevin Lifetime VIP

    @Hermes hey Hermes!~ amazing job :) try to pronounce ‘pain’ with a clearer ‘ai’ sound. But the rest was great 😊
  • Kevin Lifetime VIP

    @旁观者 hey there!~ thank you so much! Yes, my accent is a typical London accent haha. I loved your reading~ be careful though with some pronunciation like ‘through’ ‘withstand’ ~ keep it up!~

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